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Invisilator

Working together as a team was really easy because all of my group consisted of my friends. It took us All a lot of time to be able to come up with an idea but eventually we settled on the Invisilator. The Invisilator is a device that makes you turn invisible.

We came up with the idea for our invention by some brainstorming. We had the idea of becoming invisible so we could pull pranks on random people and so we could sneak into the movies o stuff like that. We created the thumbnail of a see through person talking to a pedestrian and scaring him.  Our final draft of the poster was almost identical to our thumbnail and then we added the price of the product and a few slogans and a very small and non detailed description.

Our script for our invention was all about us pulling pranks on our friend Noah. We hit him with a bag and we also scared him by talking and he thought he was hearing things. Most of our shots for the video were medium shots and not from too close. We barely encountered problems exept for backround noise and stuff like that.

Overall I have learned that teamwork Is key to having a good result!!!

 

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The invisilator
At first we didn’t know what to do as an invention, but we finally came to the conclusion that we were going to do an invisibility cloak. It was a simple idea that no one in the class was doing. We made it $999.99 and named it the Invisilator. The poster is a man being scared by an invisible man.

We originally wanted to do a smart watch but then came to the decision that the cloak was better. For the thumbnail we wanted a scary yet invisible figure. We decided that we are going to do a man in the cloak scaring a normal man. We did a poster with the name, Invisilator at the top and right under we did $999.99 with the man in the cloak scaring the other man. We also did a small description on the side.
The script is about three kids that use the cloak to scare their friend. We used a real life situation to advertise the product. The shots we had were Rodrigo and I sitting at a table and Kyle comes up to us to show us the Invisilator. After that we all decide to use the Invisilator to prank Noah. The prank goes great until Noah hears us and steals the Invisilator and runs away with it, being invisible.
When we shot the video we didn’t have many problems except for the group laughing in the middle of shots and having to do it over again. But eventually we were able to do the shots seriously.
What I have learned from the project so far is that people in the group don’t always think the same but, we eventually come to an agreement.

The Invisilator
Rodrigo: Hey look what I bought.
Manuel: What?
Rodrigo: The Invisilator.
Manuel: What does it do?
Rodrigo: it makes you…….Invisible
Manuel: Cool how much did it cost?
Rodrigo: $999.99
Manuel: I wanna try
Both go invisible
Manuel: there are so many things we can do with this
Rodrigo: Like?
Manuel: Pulling pranks. What can’t we do with this?
Follow Noah and keep bothering him
Manuel: where did you get this anyway?
Rodrigo: Invisilator.com
Manuel: Can you get it at a store?
Rodrigo: No
Noah steals the cloak and runs away being invisible
Noah: I’m invisible now
Rodrigo: that didn’t work out very well
Manuel: No it didn’t
Kyle does sales pitch

 

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My name is sepand z. and I created the micro zap with my group. The group was Brandon, Corey, Bryan, Carlos and I. we were all brainstorming while thinking about the invention, and then Bryan thought about the micro zap.

        The micro zap is basically a box that has a huge zap button on side of the box. It’s all black and the zap button is purple. We painted it very good and choice the best colors possible.

 It works by writing what you want on a piece of paper what you want to eat, then you open the micro zap and place the piece of paper in the micro zap, you then press zap and whatever you wrote on the piece of paper would appear right before your eyes.

        The difficulties of the project was waiting for the paint to dry and videotaping the project. While videotaping the project we had to retake shots over and over again till we finally got the right shot.

        The poster we made was very nice it was very colorful it had a picture of a hamburger that I made. It was like a McDonald’s big mac but better. I think it would taste good if it was real.

        The micro zap was successful and the project was fine till we left it outside and some kids broke it. But overall we enjoyed working with everyone and had fun.

Script:
Joe: Ugh, I’m so hungry. I wish there was a way to get food super quickly.

Salesman: Well look no further! Introducing the Micro-Zap! The micro-zap is a fast way to get your food. Here is how it works. You write what you want on a piece of paper and stick it into the micro-zap. Then, click the ZAP button and its there!

Dwyane: I got my micro-zap and I love it!

Albert: Oh me too! It is amazing!

Joe: Well where can I get one?

Salesman: I happen to have one with me now. Here you go. *gives Joe the micro-zap*

*Shows how Microzap is used*

Joe: Whoa thanks!

Dwyane: The MircroZap is only 9,875 dollars!

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Invention Essay
Our invention is insta-abs.
We created it because its hard and takes a while to get a six-pack.
Its wasn’t that hard to think of were lazy and we wanted six packs.
The thumbnail was easy we drew a seringe and a stick figure.
Someone would buy it because who doesn’t want a six-pack. The cost is $600.
Our script was about a ripped guy who has a pale friend who wants a 6-pack. So the ripped guy brings him to a doctor who gives him a shot that gives him a 6-pack. He needed a 6-pack so he could go to the tool convention with his swole friend.
Our sketches were the before where he is flat chested. Then it shows during the surgery with the injection. Then it shoes the end results with his brand new 6-pack set of abs.
The problem we had with our video was we kept repeating words or scenes or messing up a high five or something stupid. We also had some mix-ups with our lines. What we would do next time is make sure we don’t repeat any lines or scenes and make sure we remember our lines perfectly. To solve the problems we just kept trying until we got it right.
What we learned from the project is some lazy people use surgery to get what other people achieve by hard work and determinations with a shot and money. Money makes the world go round.

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      My group is creating a device called Tele Reality. We have all agreed that this is a very good idea. We are currently working on the video. Me, Liudvikas, and Steven created a really cool poster. We already created a script. So now we are rehearsing the script.

      My invention, Tele Reality, can take you into your TV show or movies. It works by making your DNA cells into microscopic size, and at supersonic speed, and into the show. It is on a 64“ inch screen. You will get a remote with a button that will take you into the show. You will also get a TV guide that tells you all the TV shows.

     Over 90 percent of people who bought this product said that it works perfectly! If people tell you it stinks, they are lying! It’s defiantly worth your time and money. We have spent all of our time to perfect it. If you don’t like it, we will give your money back guarantied!

   For only 1999.99, you can buy this product. Plus shipping and handling and tax. I hope you enjoy this product as much as I did. I, president Obama’s son, sure did.

I, president Obama’s son, approve this message

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In the beginning of this project we needed to create a group of at least 5 people and come up with an invention that we would invent. My group consisted of Joey V, Peter L Bruna P, and Hudson W and myself.  The invention could not be something already created. We came up with the Swagger Ray. It took a lot of disagreements before we decided to do our invention. The way that we came up with our invention was we talked about something that we would buy if there was one, and we finally thought about a ray that would give swag if you were shot with it.After we came up with our invention we had to sketch it out on a small piece of paper and explain what it is what it does and how much it cost. After that we had to show Mr. Goldstein our invention and see if the sketch is good after having him check it we can go and re-draw it on a bigger poster. This time the Poster had to have color. The big poster also had to explain why you should buy the product and what is does and how much it costs. Our poster had all the required things and a lot of color since Peter went a little crazy with the markers.  The poster was similar to the drawing that we did first but with more detail.Once we all had our scripts we had to sketch a storyboard. This was somewhat difficult because we had to sketch out everyone and put them in the right place. But the storyboard also helped us because it showed us a head of time for what we would be filming. Using the storyboard we were able to secede what it is that we are doing to end our video. We decided that we would have Peter dance with Joey after he becomes cool.Once we finished all of this we were finally ready to shot. At first the shooting was fine but then things got a little crazy. Peter was getting upset that we had to shoot the same scene over and over and OVER again. Another problem we had was Joey did not relax and was being a bit of a perfectionist. In the end we came up with a solution to stop filming that same scene and film a different one and have Joey relax and not be so controlled with it. The shooting was also really hard because we had to think of what day we wanted to shoot and make sure we bring the props for that day. In the end the filming was really hard. The only thing that I would do next time is not allow my group to fight.In the end I learned that coming up with an invention is actually really hard and you need to work with your group and hear everyone out for their ideas. Another thing I learned was that you will always have difficulties no matter where you are, but eh main thing to do is not freak out and stay calm because there is always a solution you just might have to wait for it to come out.

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Joey: uhhh this is bogus.

Bruna: Yo dude look at that nerd over there.

Joey: (nods when the narrator talks)

Narrator: Are you a nerd do you hate it? Do you want to be like him (camera points at Joey)? Introducing the SWAGGER RAY!!!!!!

Peter: We are going to make you cool.

Peter: (zap)

Joey: Swag Much.

Peter: (Dances)

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Invention Essay
By Bruno F
Me and Jack .E worked as a team to create an idea by looking for objects in the room to see if it’s eligible. We both had a hard time agreeing on one thing, when we finally agreed on something. We both agreed on the idea of making my watch a teleporting device that teleports objects from your house to your current location. We first started off by making sketches of how the watch would look and how it works. Then we decided to just leave it the way it was. So then, we started on the poster. It took really long to finish it due to our disagreeing. We were the last ones to finish it. When we finally finished the poster, we were thinking of ideas for the video we were going shoot.

Our invention was the “T-Bolt”. The T-Bolt is a watch that can teleport any object from your house to your current location. How, you ask? Well first you would have to scan the object by pressing and holding the “T” button on the watch. When you do that, a beam should come out of the watch. When the beam comes out, you have to scan the objects you want. The T-Bolt has no limit! You can scan endless object to your watch. Then, when you need the object, you simply press the “T” Button and type in what you need. After you type it in, the object will come out of the other side. It’s that easy!

Jack and I came up with the idea by first brainstorming for any eligible objects around the room. When we finally decided to use my watch, we started making thumbnail sketches for our poster. We drew out examples of what we would draw in our poster. When we finished, with our ideas, we started on our poster. We first started of by drawing the title of our invention on our poster. Me and jack decided that our strategy was “I draw, and he colors.” So I drew the watch and he colored it. When we finished the watch, we started writing a description of the T-Bolt that tells what it does, why you should buy it, and how much it costs.

Next, Jack and I wrote a script for our video that we were going to shoot. Our script was about our characters speaking of the T-Bolt and the problem one of the characters was facing, which was forgetting his wallet. After we finished the script, we started on the storyboard. The storyboard was going to be what was happening in our video. When we shot the video, we faced a lot of problems, like saying our parts wrong. What we did differently was practice a little them shot the video.

What we learned was how to do so many things on the computer, like how to edit the video in Windows Moviemaker. We also had a lot of fun.

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